wörk (fix #2)

ThesTeX/content/0-introduction.tex

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ To proceed in the games narrative story, the caches are to be completed.
 The players have to complete a task with context of the caches' location.
 \image{.5\textwidth}{../../PresTeX/images/gg2}{Geogame map view}{img:gg2}
 
-\section{Research with location based games}
+\section{Research with location based games}\label{sec:gg-res}
 Usually, when the effectiveness of location based educational games is to be measured, the following pattern is applied:
 
 After a mission statement has been defined and approved, a fitting statistical framework has to be developed.

ThesTeX/content/1-scope.tex

@@ -1,46 +1,36 @@
 \label{sec:scope}
-\section{Goal definition}
+\section{Goal definition}\label{sec:require}
-A Framework for the Analysis of Spatial Game Data
+To provide a ground truth to findings derived from questionnaires about geogames (like described in \autoref{sec:gg-res}), a \emph{Framework for the Analysis of Spatial Game Data} is the goal of this work.
-\begin{itemize}
+This framework shall rely on geogame log files providing both real world data (location and locomotion) and ingame data (game process, game actions).
-	\item Framework for analysis
+From these logs, the framework shall support the creation of different analysis reports.
-	\item Two target groups:
+To be a true framework, a tight coupling to any specific game is out of bounds.
-		\begin{itemize}
+For an holistic solution, the integration of external data (e.g. questionnaire results) allows the framework to compute an overall result.
-		\item Expert users/researchers
-		\item Staging/designing staff
-		\end{itemize}
-	\item Integration of external data (questionnaire results)
-	\item Adaptable for multiple games
-\end{itemize}
 
+\subsection{Target groups}
+With researches extracting influences of games into the players' behaviour, the first target group of the analysis framework is clear.
+A second user group are the game staging and game designing staff.
+They require feedback about difficult sections in the game, hard to reach locations, or overcrowded situations to improve the game emjoyment of the players.
+Additionally they need statistics to conclude the game session with a review of the game round.
+
+With spatial trajectories of possibly individual players, some basic privacy protection needs to restrict the access to the log files to a minimal amount of people.
+Additionally, a user interface for the creation of predefined analysis settings with custom logs provides the stagers and designers a reasonable information basis.
 
 \section{Components}
-Prerequisites: Game log
+\subsection{Prerequisites}
-\begin{itemize}
+Out of scope for this work is the creation of the geogame logs, they are a prerequisite for the application of the framework for any (geo-)game.
-	\item Creation
+Obviously, game sessions without logs have no data basis for an evaluation left.
-	\item Storage
+Not only the creation but also the storage of the game logs is not to be considered here.
-\end{itemize}
+As long as an interface to access the logs is provided, an access client belongs to the scope of the framework.
-New components
-\begin{itemize}
-	\item Per-game importer (Web client, File loader, …)
-	\item Analyzer modules (number crunching)
-	\item Output \& Visualization (CSV, [Geo]JSON, KML, Graphs, …)
-	\item Interface (Configuration)
-	\item Cross-game comparisons
-\end{itemize}
 
-\section{Requirements}\label{sec:require} %TODO
+\subsection{New components}
-Wait, what did I want to do again?
+The framework can be defined by the follwing components:
 \begin{itemize}
-	\item Per-game importer (Web client, File loader, …)
+	\item Per-game importer (Web client, File loader, …) to load log files for analysis
-	\item Analyzer modules (number crunching)
+	\item Analyzer modules to perform the number crunching and extraction of information
-	\item Output \& Visualization (CSV, [Geo]JSON, KML, Graphs, …)
+	\item Output \& Visualization export the derived information for storage, interpretation or further analysis, e.g. into CSV, [Geo]JSON, KML, Graphs, …
-	\item Interface (Configuration)
+	\item User Interface for the configuration of the analysis run and the selection of processed game logs
-		\begin{itemize}
-		\item Expert users/researchers
-		\item Staging/designing staff
-		\end{itemize}
-	\item Cross-game comparisons
-	\item Integration of external data (questionnaire results)
 \end{itemize}
 
 
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